One is a poem.
One is a 100 word story.
I think you can work out which is which.
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Sunday. Click. Monday
The overriding sense that
A change is needed.
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“How was it?”
“Yeah, not too bad. Better than expected. I got up to Rhodes.”
“Nice work! I thought you were taking it easy?”
“I was, but I wanted to get a last hill in my legs before the race next week. I gunned it on the way down. Managed a three-forty.”
“That’s quick!”
“Yep. Only a minute slower downhill than a top runner manages per kilometre on the flat for forty-two in a row.”
“Yeah but they weigh forty kilograms.”
“True. Guess I’m still faster than a dog walker that finds a body in a crap novel.”
“Every cloud…”
Umm… which is which again?? just kidding! I really liked the story 🙂
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Thanks Jess! Glad to see you passed the poem/story challenge hehe 🙂 It all felt a bit like cheating – Sunday night job-related-moaning and a conversation with my wife! Thanks for reading – always great to hear from you.
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I loved that haiku! 😀
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Thanks! I’m probably breaking all kinds of haiku laws but I have fun with them and I’m so pleased you took time to read and comment 🙂
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